I dreamed of you making love to me.
But it was not me, I am not she.
Envy fills my mind, heart and eyes.
Wishing you were between my thighs.
She caresses you upon your chest.
As you suckle and fondle her breast.
A sweet moan escapes from her lips.
Wishing it was me within that ellipse.
You kiss a trail, ever moving south.
Special kisses bestowed by your mouth.
She rocks, riding the waves of pleasure.
Wishing you would come find my treasure.
Offering her your manhood, supreme.
She sucks and licks up all the cream.
Flipping her, you take her from the back.
Wishing it were me, you would whack.
Thrusting, you came with a loud roar.
My mound soaking wet, to the core.
Touching, wanting your hands instead
Wishing for you to come here to my bed.
A contest entry
- TURN ME ON!! open to men and women by Laura.
450 points, ended March 9, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Honorable mention
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Deep feelings of unrequited love. This was very erotic, but with a tinge of sadness as well.
Thanks for entering, and good luck in the contest.
Novy and Brazos -
very well penned lyrics here i think you did a very excellent job the cups were worth it
take care
Lil Atl 30319 -
I have been having that same dream
Know exactly how you feel
A pleasure to read
Love ~sugar
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"Offering her your manhood, supreme.
She sucks and licks up all the cream.
Flipping her, you take her from the back.
Wishing it were me, you would whack.
Thrusting, you came with a loud roar.
My mound soaking wet, to the core.
Touching, wanting your hands instead
Wishing for you to come here to my bed."
I made my best attempt at not quoting the entire damn
thing, but - YOWZUHH!!! These two stanzas absolutely swallowed me - ALL THE WAY UP!! OH my goodness, this was fan-damn-tastic!!!!
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DEEP...my sister...DEEP
lyrics you have penned here...another one I call Full Lyrics speaking the truth and being real about life and not being ahamed...wonderful I love it.
ephiphany
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oh my, i feel sorry for you. did you ever get him? i hope you do. i know exactly how you feel. if this is about you. lol. thanks a lot and good luck.
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Sweet desires
We have often had these tantalizing thoughts of another's lover. Without ever noticing the one who is knocking at our heart's door. Go open the door! Knock, knock. Good write, very enticing indeed. Walt.
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Alright female, come the Satyr and let me try to make this wish cum true
the Satyr
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Thrusting, you came with a loud roar.
My mound soaking wet, to the core.
just loved that line..im not a free verse person but you have made this sound just so beautiful certainly in a league of its own well done its amazing..good luck in the contest
laura xx -
another HOT ONE!!
How sexual stimulating this is. I see within the desire of the writer and can feel the desire and passion of her words. hot, hot hot
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WISHFUL THINKING...
This is a poem that unveils the wishful desires in your heart for a very special man.But you know what I really enjoyed the flow of this your narrative;as per the tone,language,rhythm,and meter.All appears to have synonymous significance with the general theme WISH.Wishes do transform into realities though.GREAT WRITE LOL!!!
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Deep Sensaul Thoughts
about this man, of your imagery has the boat rocking.
It seems you really want this guy bad. You have captured each aspect of craving someone you love and desire sexually. excellent write.......novy
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