GOOD LUCK AND GOD BLESS!
Oh that stupid old dog, what a fool,
I told him that he wouldn't fit in there.
His head is smaller than his big fat butt,
and what's worse is that he doesn't even live here.
I think he's after that sexy mutt again,
she's always teasing and giving him that look.
I don't think she ever intended to give him a chance,
that dog is my best friend, I can read him like a book.
If only he used his head more often,
he wouldn't be in this mess.
I wish there was something I could do,
all I can say is good luck and God bless!
Author notes
This poem is written from the cat's point of view as she walks away, knowing there is nothing that she can do to help her friend.
Thanks for reading!
A contest entry
- fun pic inspired by honey bear.
600 points, ended March 17, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
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this poem is funny i loved it very creative and it made me smile great job
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Ha Ha Ha! I love it. That's something my stupid dog would do. I like how you wrote this from the cats point of you. Great job!
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your poem is nice
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SO VERY FUNNY!!
Again so very funny this os so very cute!!
MASTERFULLY done once again!! I love the picture!!
I also love every single line in this piece
piece of writting. well done my dear poet
friend!! Thank You!!
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Never thought about taking a cat's point of view on things, very good write you penned here. You did a great impression of what the cat was thinking. Your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully good luck in the contest
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Wowzers this was amazingly fantaftic , I love this piece a lot, I can see you put lots of effort in this poem, you have a
great mind for creating poetry, and I hope you get lots of lovely comments for this amazingly fantastic poem, lol,
I can see you enjoyed writing this magical piece and I can see lots of other people will ike it when you read some more of their
lovely comments, Thanks for sharing this amazing piece and well done,
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this is the first one i have read so far and i already have a big cheesy grin on my face thank yo ufor entering and good luck in the contest with this fun write, i will be reading all again befor judging 
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Not often do you find a compassionate cat... but
what a nice change of pace. Wonderful...
lapoe.
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