La, la, la, la
sing along,
sing along and let yourself go,
go ahead and take a sip
from the cup of ecstacy
it's only going to last for a while.
So c'mon, before the heels break,
we'd better get moving.
The previews have already begun
I'm already feeling a little better.
Keep the drum beats going,
don't stop now, it's just getting good.
Take another sip and sit back,
relax. Enjoy the view
from your bedroom window,
everything seems so small.
Come away with me,
I'll show you it all.
From rooftops to the stars,
our dreams only get bigger,
Wash away the stains,
I'm here forever.
A contest entry
- Take me away by --Beautiful--.
685 points, ended March 19, 2007, 22 entries
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600 points, ended October 9, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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I like the escapist appeal in this one. thank you for entering and good luck.
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i love this poem. its a five minute get away from the world around me and thats really what i need right now. thanks alot.
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This poem has so much hidden meaning behind it. I'm not sure how to think of it. It is very well writen. And i like it very much. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
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