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Justice at last!

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There is justice in this world
storms you see come for a reason.
If you had seen his face at the vision
of his jewel trapped up there.
“You better not touch it” I say
“you may get electrocuted”…
What a delightful sight,
a sweet revenge for all the hours
of washing and polishing,
while I was bored at home.

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  • Grey Mouser
    March 10, 2007
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    Hehe, can picture the smug look of satisfaction upon the face as she says this. Thinking that he spends way too much time with the car and not enough with her.
    Thank you for ehtring into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,

    MOuser


  • LAPoe gold member
    March 8, 2007

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    Just like a car to go all funny on you and then
    laugh about it to your face. Never cross a car
    they are known for their road rage.
    Hahahaha...love your take on this one.
    laurie.


  • less than a poet
    March 8, 2007

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    ouch this was funny hello my friend and sorry i havent been here lately and as i see it i have to read so much to catch up this was a good 1 good luck in d contest