I am your master
Surrender to me my lovely
Come to me
Allow me to release my exquisite powers
Having you stand in front of me
At arms length
Let me devour your slim silhouette
Memorizing every curve
Satin white slip gleaming in the open moonlight
Coming to you touching your silky smooth shoulders
Running hands along skin, so soft like rose petals
Feeling nipples beneath the fabric
Standing suddenly erect
Knowing it's master is near
Easing your petite body down beneath me to the inviting bed
Enveloping you with my intensity
Placing lazy but sweet kisses along,
Grazing your freshly cleansed body
Scents of lavender and vanilla envading my nostrils
Warm skin seeming to swim with every touch I bestow
Kissing your ripe and full lips
As I coax your thighs apart with my knee
Heat rises as I lower myself
Towards your sweet and luscious fruit
Brushing my mouth along your lower waist
I can feel you grow wet with need
Parting your soft fleshy lips
I lower my head and close my eyes
Getting lost in your sweet orgasmic flavor
Your breathing
Becomes but that of gasps and moans
Flying high to an oblivion unknown
Your stomach heaves as you clench the sheets
Pleeing for me to continue my magic
Licking, sucking, your taste so sugary sweet
Feeling you climax
You let out a scream that may be heard far off
As I'm hungrily lapping up what you have to offer
You hit pure bliss, complete pleasure
Absolute glory
You have become the slave
To your master
-Ans you can do nothing but smile-
Author notes
Bleeding eternal
1 entry
A contest entry
- Seduce Me-♥ by adsaige.
600 points, ended August 17, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - come and see by crystallynnbradford.
300 points, ended September 6, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
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300 points, ended November 18, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Come on I need more! Teen lets show who is the master at erotic (no one over 18) by loveaswellashate.
450 points, ended December 21, 2007, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Erotic Pleasures by Jonathan Wikkins.
525 points, ended June 1, 2008, 25 entries
Gold trophy winner
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490 points, ended February 22, 55 entries
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Comments
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Lovely write.
Such depth & emotion.
Beautifully crafted.
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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I forget that poetry is not personal and I had to laugh out loud when it said "slender silhouette" certainly not me, but the write is entrancing and congrats on all of the trophies.
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Thanks...Well, I have more written personal erotic writes, but this was my first shot at erotica poetry. So goodluck with your contest.
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ooh, i just can't get enough!
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whew! is it hot in here? going for a cold shower...
brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr trouble is, it didn't help!
good luck in my contest, and thanks for entering!
mike, aka jonathan wikkins
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haha well I'm glad you enjoyed this. Goodluck with your contest
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Yummy. This is hot! I love to read from a guys or girls view the experance of these things, it is also funny when you compair a mans and womans read on these matters. Thank you very much for this sexy and exciting read. Good luck.
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this... I ... umm... wow... nothing to say... you know your goin to be on the top...lol Well thank you for joining and good luck...
Laters...
Loves....*hugs*
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Three words: Hot. As. Hell. I love the themes, the imagery, everything, with the exception of 'that may be heard far off'. In my opinion, 'that may be' has no place in a poem that is otherwise so certain about everything. Other than that, I have no criticisms (rare for me, believe me). Good luck in the contest!
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good erotica but my taste is to have my mate equal to my needs in all area's and no one will master me in any arena.
Tamara
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I actually agree with you on that, I guess I just decided to try and write something new...
But thank you for your comment and Goodluck with the contest. Some very Good erotica here, must've been extremely hard!
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this is one great poem, and I think you made your point, and that is you are a great writer, let no one tell you otherwise.
Riftkin -
very nice very nice take a lovely bow
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This is absolutely...ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm! The sensuality infused with the urgent erotic need of this...
You changed perspectives on me...first I was getting all the attention, then it was "her". Just letting you know incase you decide to edit.
But I love this, and this is going on my finalist list...BUT, I need to you review the rules. I would really like it if you put your username into the box please. Thank you -
this is really hot! wow, you did a great job on it! it made me very hot! haha. keep it up! (truly, tho, you could have had just a TEENY bit more...) good luck!
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I enjoyed this. You didn't use the same 5 words over and over (like some poets who try erotica for the first time)
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Thank you! I appreciate your comment. well i have been told that i write very good erotic poems....maybe i shall start writing more erotica
Bu thank you. glad u enjoyed it
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wow this was an amazing poem to read and it was like i was just in the story which is what i asked for so thank you for entering and good luck in it too.
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I like this poem it was good and the way you described everything i felt as if i was there just watching and the use of imagery made it seem more real
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I agree with Kleyda14 the image was just perfect!
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EXCELLENT! The imagry was perfect! I loved it!
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This was amazing,it was hot,passionate but it really just wasn't my style,Not in to the whole Master,Slave,Mistress thing,But good luck!!! It was a great write,But it just isn't doing it for me!!!
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