Come with me to Neverland
Where dreams will never grow old.
The nights will pass like shifting sand
And the days will be as gold.
The memories last,
Go on and on,
Each one I shall hold.
I'll treasure them and
Hold them close.
I'll never let them go.
I won't grow up.
I won't grow old.
The time will fade away.
Tomorrow comes, tomorrow goes.
We'll just live for today.
Come with me to Neverland.
We'll fly away, we two.
We'll share the time, forever young.
Forever, me and you.
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Just randomness
Please tell me what you think
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Goof Ball!!!!!! Loved It
WoW Peter Pan Syndrom somethin serious!!!!!! Loved it momma And I love you too! -
Very nicely done!
I love this poem..it makes me feel good (and young).
Maureen
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Swoot
Rock on. Even though it is random, you did a good job putting the rhyme and the meter together. I liked it and I think that you did a good job. Way to match things up. I liked the technical aspects of the poem the best. -
sounds like something that could be used for peterpan but I like it.
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This is a really sweet poem and defintiely captures a very wistful mood reminiscent of Peter Pan and Neverland. Very, very well-written write!!
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This is great
though I'm reading/hearing it for the second time because I think we looked at it the other day. I like it a lot.
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This is not just randomness...
...this is a very sensible poem, and it made me go all "awwww"! This reminded me of Peter Pan...
I have nothing to correct relating to the poem's structure (rhyming, line measure, etc...), but I do have to quote favorites:
"Tomorrow comes, tomorrow goes.
We'll just live for today."
This were the absolute favourite lines that I ever read...
And the last stanza:
"Come with me to Neverland.
We'll fly away, we two.
We'll share the time, forever young.
Forever, me and you."
It just...touched my heart! Again, Fridazechild, this isn't just randomness...
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