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Once again.

How can you make me feel this way,
Then never feel at all?
How do your eyes,
Your smell,
Your touch,
Paralyse me?

How can I be in love with you,
When you don't feel a thing?
Am I that much of a cheap fuck to you?
A fling,
A 'friend with benefits'?

Do you realise how you tear me up inside,
And yet these feelings I can't shake,
Why are you doing this?

I'm sorry for thinking we were meant to live for anything more.
I'm sorry I was never good enough,
To be anything more than your hook up.

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There's a small voice inside of me telling me how wrong this all is.

And yet, I can't change how I feel about him.

I don't know what to do.

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  • xirshilittleperrax
    August 21, 2007
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    Don't Worry

    THIS IS DEEP AND POWERFUL... I FEEL THAT THIS IS A BRILLIANT POEM AND THAT U HAVE A TALENT. U HAVE A TALENT AND I WILL READ EVERY POEM THAT U HAVE, THIS IS GOOD AND U SHOULD SHOULD TALK TO SOMEONE ABOUT UR SMALL VIOCE INSIDE... U SHOULD LET IT OUT AND IF U WONT ANYTHING I AM HERE. HAVE FUN WITH UR POEMS TOO. GOOD JOB MATE! LOL.