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Tripping

 




Spoon fed poetic hallucinogens,
heartbeat trips
on technicolor metaphors



Psychedelic pages spill
kaleidoscopic thoughts to host
a rave of dynamic hues spattered
across purity's canvas

 

Metallic go-go boots groove

to tie-dyed expressions sung

through a beatnik's drum



Black light illuminates,
glow in the dark fingerprints-
revealed;
journey of seduction leads
to platformed heights never known





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  • Moons Lunar Angel
    May 19, 2007
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    Can't lie don't really understand it but it's awesome nonetheless.
    Love lil


  • deadcolor dreams
    March 20, 2007

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    I like this. I'm not sure what years it's referencing.. 70's or what, but I like the theme! Great job!


  • luckynsincere
    March 9, 2007

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    This is awesome! I am going to steal this picture just to let you know Perhaps for a special gift to you
    Love ya,
    Mel


  • poetryality silver member
    March 4, 2007

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    I miss my "black light" days. I don't miss the acid trips or the hallucinations. Nope not at all. Love how it seems you brought the graphic to life. I swear I saw it move! I did, no jive...

    Excellent! This was pure rock-n-roll!


    Love You ♥

    MOM


  • Blazing White Wolf
    March 4, 2007

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    lol well this turned out to quite ibnterestiing from what you might have orginally thought some nice word choices that added to the conclusion of a 60/70's poem floating on some acid cloud I liked this hun

    love,
    Master


  • Cherokee
    March 4, 2007
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    I love beatniks!

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