blinded by life
blinded by truth
blinded by lies
blinded by choice or
i am blinded by faith &
blinded by 'Freedom'.
A contest entry
- Hairspray Coloured Blindfold by sweetpearl.
400 points, ended March 10, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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For some reason, the system did not take my 1st critique. Boo! I like short poems, too. This is wonderful! Packed with wisdom! Thank you so much for visiting me. ♥ Belle
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This kind of reminds me of how the US of A is all about the "freedom" yet they are so fucking closed-minded (I'm talking the big decision makers here). Land of the Free ... hmm, let's see ... gay is wrong, Christianity is the BEST religion, all that don't fall under it are wrong, so many other things. You also used the US colours, heh. I feel most things these days are lies though, we're trying to live a life in countries run by tight asses. Fuckers. I'm sorry, this poem got me thinking, heh.
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sweetpearl
thanks for responding
but anymore in this confused world that is what i feel
i saw the pic and that is what i felt inside
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Is my poem that bad that not one comment is on it
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