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Eternal Bond

Missing image
Crystal clear
Lake of blue
Sky so bright
In front of you

Peaceful scenes
Throughout my mind
Of a better place
And better time

Grass of green
Flowers like the sun
Two come together
Two become one

Eternal bond
Within a ring
Always worn
But never seen

~Lady Raven~

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  • owlishhunter
    March 5, 2007

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    A ring of flame
    a ring of pain
    a ring of life
    can you stay sane?

    Riddles, riddles...a lovely poem you've penned with some lovely imagery! Bravo!!


  • bird-mad girl
    March 4, 2007
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    I think I understand this.

    Despite not being with someone anymore, there is still a connection between you and this person.

    is that it?

    loved the floaty feel of this piece.

    love you mummy


    • vampira1665 silver member
      March 4, 2007
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      Could be, at least my friend thinks so as well. Thanx sweety, Love ya, Mum