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Surrender

A bite from the lips,
Tender and soft
Beautiful and warming
Comforting and welcoming
A kiss from your lips
Cuddled in your sweet embrace
I never want to leave this place

I am strong and prideful
But laid there empty,
Until you came and filled me,
Gave me my firsts,
Remebered always,
Thought of constantly.

I'll swallow some of my pride,
Let go of fear
And just feel the being of you



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To my amazing boyfriend Danny

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  • Lady Eventide
    March 21, 2007

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    Good

    Hey...great poem. I'm wondering about this Danny guy though...is he the same one we talked about a few months back or is he another one?


    • Azume
      March 21, 2007
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      Heyy,thanks for the comment,yeah,he's the same one from a few months back.thanks for remembering =)


  • Tenchi 7786
    March 6, 2007
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    Great write!!! really amazing!