Moon light
High tide
Hand in hand
Side by side
Walking along
Thinking of
Remembering
Our favorite song
Cool breeze
Salty air
Swirling around
Ruffling hair
Arm in arm
In a silver glow
We dance to the tune
Of our favorite song
Glittering stars
Just like your eyes
Shining so bright
In this moonlit night
Safe in your arms
You hold me tight
My head on your chest
No fear in sight
And as lips meet
A taste of salt
An innocent kiss
Parting lips
Our world….
…. comes to a halt
This moonlit night
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Tommy, you do soft romance so well, 'tis quite easy to get lost with in your words on this one, great imagery, flow and rhyme...well done, I loved it
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Well, since your sitting beside me you know what I think.
Lol.
But i'll say it again. Lol.
I like it, although I can't imagine myself in it with anyone.
Seeing as though I really don't want anyone..
Anyways. Good poem.
Luv Cazza
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what a beautiful image, great write, if i had more time i'd leave something besides this shitty comment behind
xoxo,
lys
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wow
i love it. it is so romatic and i can visualive it very well. i can picture myself n the same situation with the person i have feelings for. thanks for the inspiration. great write, keep it up.
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