I want a man who calls me Angel
A man who holds me when I cry
A man who loves me when I’m fallen
Who worships me when I fly.
I want a man who’s not too proud
To admit when he is wrong
A man who doesn’t think he’s weak
Just because I’m strong.
I want a man who stands behind me
(And I mean that literally)
A man who wraps me in his arms
And whispers, he loves me.
I want a man who shows me passion
This is important -I’ll confess-
But, I don’t expect, perfection.
I want a man! No more… No less!
Patricia Gibson-Little
February 14, 2002
Author notes
Thank you Joe for being that man.
Written February 14th, 2002
In a list
A contest entry
- Does your Perfect Person (Soulmate) Exist? by Joe Spencer.
250 points, ended July 13, 2003, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a cute poem. I love the ending. I think most women have been there and can relate, me included. Thank you for your kind words. I hope you continue to write and keep up the good work.
Love forever,
Jewels -
I love the rhyme and rhythm of this one. It reads so easily. I love the last two lines in the second verse. That's such a powerful statement and one all women want from a man. Thanks for this wonderful poem. Good luck in the contest.
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thank you, i will judge july 10
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Beautiful! The rhyme and passion put into this poem made it real and visual. Keep up the great work!
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a poem of perfection without being perfect... thanks for the wonderful comment on "prince charming" I love how you described his eyes "somewhere between brown and heaven" this was a beautiful visual for me.
Yvonne:)
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