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If I Could

If I could write a poem, I'd fill that poem with love
If I could paint a picture, it would be of the sky above
If I could sing a song, It would come right from my heart
If I could teach understanding, I know just where I'd start

I would start with little babies, singing songs of gentleness
I would teach songs to the toddlers, with a little tenderness
I would teach the little children, who are just beginning school
I would also tell their parents, observe the golden rule

For we can be a better teacher, if we practice what we say
We'll have a better pupil, if we do this every day
They'll be a better neighbor, they'll be a better friend
They'll walk that extra mile, maybe to the journeys end

So why not give a smile, maybe a hug or two
Someone may just give, them all right back to you
A smile in any language, is always a welcomed sight
It just may be the start, of a friendship that takes flight

                                 3/26/2002

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This is a prewrite poem. I don't know if it is my best, but it is one that I treasure.

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  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 12, 2007

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    Very very well done piece this is!
    I loved it
    Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest


  • Tadriandurfee gold member
    March 6, 2007
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    It is a Treasure!

    Oh Katie...this is one excellent piece! We'd all be better people and it would be a better world if we could give this to one another. This is one very fine piece! My compliments! Good luck in the contest!


  • SensualWhispers
    March 4, 2007

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    Wonderful

    I love this first stanza:

    If I could write a poem, I'd fill that poem with love
    If I could paint a picture, it would be of the sky above
    If I could sing a song, It would come right from my heart
    If I could teach understanding, I know just where I'd start

    It's excellently written. It is just what I think most of us think... You've done a great job on this. Kassie


  • earthstar
    March 4, 2007

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    Great job

    If I could write a poem, I'd fill that poem with love
    If I could paint a picture, it would be of the sky above
    If I could sing a song, It would come right from my heart
    If I could teach understanding, I know just where I'd start
    I truly love these lines I agree this world needs more love thats for feeling in the need and letting us know. If I could it a great use if we could fill the world with love there would be alot less fighting. Thanks for being a star in my eyes hope you are doing well. Keep it pouring out from you heart great write love b


  • tawk gold member
    March 3, 2007

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    Such a beautiful poem of love. If everyone would give a smile to each other the world would be such a better place to live. Excellent write


  • wings of an angel
    March 3, 2007
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    This is a lovely poem you penned here dear poet. Our days are much better when you enter it with a smile and practice what we say and do. Your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem. Well done and good luck in my contest

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