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The Psyche

The psyche could see what lay ahead,
the knowledge, was something she did dread,
for this knight on his horse could not be warned,
that the quest at hand, has been scorned.


What the maiden of future sights has seen,

he drifts by allurement into the dark careen,
into a lair, entrapped by forces of black magic
avalanched by evil, a journey to lead to tragic.


This psychic vision slowly began to slightly fade,
not seeing yet, who's chant shall be portrayed.
Only shadows of a figure whom suspiciously traipse,
whilst the knight is trapped, this someone escapes.


Quickly she chants a spell, a charm for protection,
hoping they receive in time, this magical projection.
Together on a journey, seeking the magical wonder
how to avoid this treacherous event? The psyche did ponder


With her powers and knowledge of what may unfold,
she shall aide in good's honor, so evil, behold.
A magic within and beyond her trusty seeing crystal,
she shall protect them with powers of natures elemental.

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  • Inside and out
    March 4, 2007

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    This is a lovely poem you penned here, your rhythm and rhyme flowed beautifully throughout the entire poem. Good luck in the contest, well done dear poet


  • Avendesora Dreamer
    March 4, 2007

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    this was an interesting little story... a warning to those who heed not warings and hope to those who truly need it...I especially liked "she shall aide in good's honor, so evil, behold.
    A magic within and beyond her trusty seeing crystal,
    she shall protect them with powers of natures elemental."


  • PorcelainDollies
    March 4, 2007

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    oh pretty amazing, reminded me of my favourite television program, 'charmed' and Pheobe has the power of preminition, while the others have more attaching powers. she stil manages to kick some serious demon butt, while looking the hottest. (closely followe by Paige)

    but yeh cool

    xporecelaindolliesx


  • MiZZ-AmAyA
    March 4, 2007
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    Nice...and thanks for entering :-


  • cherche -d -ame
    March 3, 2007

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    I looked at the picture and I must say you did it justice. This has an almost eery beginning and in between , yet somehow it ends in hope...with protection from and against evil granted , by the forces and powers of one that knows more than mere mortal does. Best wishes in this contest , I enjoyed reading,
    reenie


  • Ereshkigal
    March 3, 2007

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    Definitely applies to the picture. Nice plot, and good insight into what she's thinking. One question: Were the comma's there for rhythm? I couldn't figure out if I should read it with all the pauses, or just by line. Either way, it's very good, so I wish you luck in the contest!

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