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Confused Feelings

Does she love him?
She tells herself she does
Not the him he’s now
But the one he once was

Will he change?
She tells herself he will
Not now maybe later
But she doesn’t know how to feel

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  • BehindTheseEyes
    March 8, 2007

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    What good writing, so full of feelings in such a short poem, but one does not have to say much to convey their feelings, good job, great poem