The Wonder Of You by poeticweaver at All poetry

Breath of Heaven
Like fresh fragrance after the rain
Quenching my thirst
Her loyal love floods my heart's needs
Through compassion

I hear soft strings
As if an orchestra played
For love only
Nourishing silent lullabies
With gentle grace

Light poetry
Verses on the sheets of my soul
For all to read
So her eyes can behold my words
Blue as oceans

Devotion's tongue
Speaks crystal clear into night skies
Of Unity
Between the lines of life and death
Our love smiles

Author notes

Thanks for reading me, much love, Timothy ~

In a list

Weavings Of Love~ • next in list

A contest entry

Making Love by poet2angels. 425 points, ended March 10, 2007, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Jalalbad
May 24, 2007
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this poem
is one of the prettiest pieces I've read in a long long time! Good luck in contest!
Judy
- poeticweaver
  May 24, 2007
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  Thanks
  I appreciate you reading me.
Rianna Bear
March 12, 2007

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Lover-ly
Very sweet and romantic. The love is just oozing all over the place with this one. "quenching [your] thirst" with her love sound so pure and the kind of feeling we want to, long to, get from that person we pour our heart to. I love the feeling of vulnerability in this piece, but she seems as though leaving yourself open is very much worth it.

Great emotional write!!
Legend
March 10, 2007
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A wonderfully worded piece that was a joy to read Congratulations on your award
Frozentearz
March 10, 2007
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Congratulations on your award a delight to read,
clapping..
Warm thoughts
Frozentearz
Lonely
March 9, 2007

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Excellent
This is such a "sweet" poem.. That was the most suitable word! It was almost like a lulaby.. The lines are full of love.. As always my dear friend.. A wonderful write! Keep writing

~ Lonely
myrataal
March 6, 2007

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Timothy -- your poetry is inspiring ...
and compassionate. And as always, this poem told the reader so much about the soul of the writer: his unconditional love for those reading both his soul and his gentle words, which reflect his love for God.

Thank you for remembering me, too, and for including me in your world. Pen on, Poet!

Love
Myra
Ms2real
March 5, 2007

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your are truly an inspiration man. miss u lods.. your work can never dissapoint me. when ever im feeling down i come here to read your beautiful work and i feel it. bless you brother and pray for me.
-Vanity....
(Krystal)
ps
i really love how u had ma name all in ya work
Whispering Winds
March 4, 2007

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Lovely words of poetry
My dear Poeticweaver,

This is such a beautiful write my friend. I am so happy to see you writing once again. The words you have shared with us are so refreshing and so full of the love I have missed feeling from reading you. Thank for sharing this, for it is always a pleasure to read you.

Much love my friend,
Tammy
earthstar
March 4, 2007

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Great Job

I hear soft strings
As if an orcastra played
For love only
Nourishing silent lulubyes
With gentle grace

I love these lines you have done a wonder job like you always do. You are such a great poet. Good luck on the contest. thinking of you much love your sister b
Heavenly Angel
March 4, 2007

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My sweet love brother, this is just so soft and so beautiful!
sigh...
Your heart of love just spills forth such beautiful words for your lady love and I'm so very pleased to be able to come and read them
All the very best to you, sweetie; this is gorgeous!
Frozentearz
March 4, 2007

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Passsion passion everywhere
wonderful work, soft and beautiful
Thanks for sharing
Warm thoughts
Frozentearz
queenie
March 4, 2007

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this is all about the true passion,about the emotions and not just the act.you are the one to make the art of lovemaking known.all you have to do is open your heart and this is the magic that flows from it.this is so special.
Angel With No Halo
March 3, 2007

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Oh my this is beautifully written. Soooo full of passion and love. You are an amazing poet my new friend. Good luck in the contest.

~Krys~
Whispering Mirage
March 3, 2007

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Always, always beauty from the heart.... I love every aspect of this, a most devoted love you have expressed with your pen... I especially love the third stanza, I assume it must be the lovely metaphors used "Verses on the sheets of my soul" Gorgeous! Always my joy to visit your pages........ BEAUTIFUL! Much love to you and yours dear one, Annie
Desire
March 3, 2007

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Beautiful-
Beautiful verse of Love You have penned my Friend
Emotions just ooze from Your pen
Thank You for sharing this my Friend and Happy to see You online~
Missed Your presence...

Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
Wandika
March 3, 2007
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Very nice Timothy.
Your consistant if nothing else in your ability to write wonderful love poetry.
poet2angels
March 3, 2007

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beautiful
Your poem is so very lovely, Timothy...
I recognize your beautiful language and tasteful phrases of love...So romantic this piece is!
I really love this ...Ot is one of my favorites of yours and I am so very glad that you entered!
Lynda
michellemybelle
March 3, 2007

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this is tender yet passionate

you did well painting a lovely picture of love

very well done with gentle words, good luck in this contest
Michelle