Sing to
her of newfound
peace as night beckons; she
longs for fears healed in moonlit song,
tonight.
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still trying to break through...another wisp~
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I promise not to use the word "wisp."
If I could sing that moonlit song for you I would...I'd sing it for me too while I was at it.
Miss Mari is right, it's not about the length of the poem, but simply that you are writing. I miss your poems Mi, I'm glad I'm even getting the "snippets." (See, I didn't say "wisps."
You and Mariza both use night scenes to describe that sense of comfort...that need for it.
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This wisp is tender and has such a peaceful cadence.
You have done it, you already broke through the writer block, lack of inspiration, numb fingers or however they call a long 'pen break'. Your last poems show that. We don't need to write long stuffs when we can say what we need to say in just few lines
Wishing you well always and sending lots of kisses,
Mari
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Another lovely 'wisp' miMi.
May all who are troubled in mind and spirit find peace. 
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