Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

I'm only human

If I could find you,
Deep inside you,
I'd hope to find the you
I've been looking for.
All my thoughts have deceived me,
Turned me inside out.
Time and Time again,
My body has been broken,
and I am running out of the tools,
and patience to fix it once more.
I give to feel,
But instead I stay hollow.
Emptiness has found a home in me.
Laying here wondering of my worth,
Of the reality I cling to.
If the tearing inside me is normal?
From the depths of my subconscious,
comes words of dismay,
Reminding me that I will not win.
So I distance myself from the world,
Only to have it pull me back,
To love,
To fall,
To Die within.
Tell me I am not alone.
Tell me you understand.
Just stay here and listen,
Until it goes away.
Please.

Author notes

Well a little depressing but I am having a rough day.

Found lip prints in the snow
By your door
WIsh you'd stop
Kissing his feet.
Written June 26th, 2003

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • YourBelovedTragedyx
    April 20, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    wow!! thats all i have to say <3

  • VintageEyes
    April 14, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    this is so sad ...but its so exsquisitly constructed!! absolutley beautiful job!

  • Anonamus
    January 9, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Good job, Baby. You know I'll always be here for you when you need me most.

  • nemo
    June 26, 2003
    Edit | Reply
    Well who told you that depression is always f.e. I just love deprssing ones...

    Especially so well written...


    Tell me I am not alone.
    Tell me you understand.
    Just stay here and listen,
    Until it goes away.
    Please.

    I understand you very well...If you need me - Ill be there...


    sajonara




  • Kaity
    June 26, 2003
    Edit | Reply

    tremendous talent

    being a little depressed doesn't hurt anyone, especially if it causes you to write like that. job well done!

1 - 5 of 5