I wished that I could tell you
How much you meant to me
I wished that I could show you
I wished that you would see
But now I know its bull shit
I'll never be with you
Now I can say well fuck this
And I've moved on to someone new
You shunned me and turned me cold
And now you'll never know
How much you changed my life
How much you helped me grow
What went through your mind
As you talked to me
Every fucking time
When I couldn't stop the thinking...
I just wanted you to hear me
I just wanted you to know
I just wanted you to see me
And now I've let you go
A contest entry
- Rhyme ^^ by burning alive.
550 points, ended April 1, 2007, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Bad Poetry by Bapudi.
400 points, ended June 20, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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nice entry
Pretty good...I mean bad.
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Wow. This was a very powerful piece. It was so full of raw emotion and, yes, I want to say damn!!!! That was great poetry. Well done for this wonderful write.
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gracias (sp). i liked it too. i thought of the title after reading the poem and thinking to mysfelf "damn was i really thinking that? man i'm a bitch" lol. thank you.
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