She was eye candy for one and all,
Supreme figure standng tall,
and towering over all the rest,
She truly was the absolute best.
But her life was scattered with broken dreams,
They lay all around her in reams and reams.
She should in reality, have been covered in clover,
Instead of that she was constantly done over,
By venomous scum; Why did'nt she run?
A Sugar coated pill,
Sent this beauty over the Hill.
A contest entry
- ♥ Do You Bleed Glitter? ♥ by Dead Star--x.
450 points, ended March 22, 2007, 61 entries
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I think that you hit the nail right on the head. Great write.
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So true
Such beauty and they say she was very smart I guess you do become who you hang with for they truly sucked her life right out of her from such a from of mental abuse indeed .So sad
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Sweet.
I enjoyed reading this poem as a fan and I think you did a great job with it. Though, only a couple lines does the rhyming seem forced, but it flows none-the-less. Well done. -
nice! luv the tribute-shes one of my favorite sex symbols, sad how she died she really was the perfect hero of dirty pretty xp thanx for entering & welcome to the finalists list!!! xp
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good write with nice rhyme and flow...good job
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