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The Red Cross

Our two tallest symbols of security.
They seemed they would never fall.
Until one morning in september
The wall began to crumble
In all of the violence
In all of the strife
There was one glimmer of hope
One to save our countries life.
The red cross fought it's way through
saving hundreds injured.
When it was thought
There was nothing we could do.
They kept on and that september morning
Their slogan never held more true
"We're in your neighborhood"

Author notes

I don't know exactly. I just feel that was one big ..devastation that we probably couldn't of gotten through without the red cross.

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  • lesbian-in-love
    September 11

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    Yes that is true without the Red Cross then what would have happened? This was moving. I enjoyed it. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    April 4, 2007

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    You bring back vivid memories to many of us and give us a good reminder of what the Red Cross did to help.

    Best of luck in the contest


  • Sharcu silver member
    April 3, 2007

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    Indeed it would have been hard without the Red Cross on that day. They definitely helped. Well done! Thanks for entering
    --Tim


  • wishintreeUK
    March 27, 2007

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    Thank you for entering.

    I am sure the Red Cross were amongst the first one to lend a helping hand on that terrible, unforgettable day... the slogan as your last line sums up your theme very well.

    Well done

    ~Katie~


  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    March 4, 2007

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    Thanks for entering

    A beautiful tribute to these brave souls who do not think of themselves when others need them more.

    Let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosemary


  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    March 4, 2007

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    Thanks for entering

    A beautiful tribute to these brave souls who do not think of themselves when others need them more.

    Let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosemary


    • Poetic Obscenity
      March 4, 2007

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      Thank you very much. It just seemed to me that..what a greater time of need. How they helped. Inspiring. Thank you again.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 3, 2007

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    Beautifully penned thought is your write and so so true. You have given a wonderful message on the strength of the Red Cross all over the world.

    Welcome to All Poetry and good luck in our contest
    Gaylene


  • FifthDove
    March 3, 2007
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    Thanks for the entry and welcome to the site!

    I felt a tingle as I was reading this poem, it has a powerful message and the imagery for me was great! Thank you very much for taking the time to write for and enter our contest. Best wishes and welcome to AllpoetryDove


    • Poetic Obscenity
      March 4, 2007
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      Thank you ever so much. I'm glad you could feel it. I mean..we all felt it. I'm just glad it's understood.


  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    March 3, 2007

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    Thank you for entering

    One of the most tearful tributes you could do for the Red Cross. We all remember September 11th. Thanks for sharing.

    Good luck in the contest and welcome to allpoetry. I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy


  • Samplette gold member
    March 3, 2007
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    This is a good write. And the red cross was there. A nice piece. Best wished in the contest.
    Sam

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