Your words shot me like a bullet
Never did i think you would say such a thing
My heart shattered as i heard your words dripping with hate
The phone dropped along with the ring
Your words tore at my broken heart
The cuts they left were deeper than the slits in my wrists
A single tear splattered on a bloody wrist
As I wondered why these words escaped from your lips
Your words rang like a bell in my head
Echoing until my knees hit the floor
Wondering why my life's been relying on one bare thread
Wanting to walk out of the door
Your words pushed me off a cliff
Forcing me through the darkness
A darkness sharper than the grim reaper's scythe
Which hit me and ended all my sadness
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a sad poem you wrote here dear poet, your rhythm and rhyme flowed superbly, well done dear poet
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Oh my goodness. How sad. Yes, when someone says something hurtful to us it can really take a toll on a person, especially if it comes from the least expected person or someone you love. This was a good poem. This lines really caught my attention and were my favorite lines:
"A single tear splattered on a bloody wrist
As I wondered why these words escaped from your lips"
I know what it is to be a cutter and so I understand the feelings in your poem. Good job.
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Powerful, dark, full of emotions. The last line really packed a great punch from angst to a feeling of finality. Lovely job! Very lovely job!
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