It's a beautiful day but i feel ready to die
I know you won't come back no matter how much i cry
It's a beautiful day but i've lost so much blood
I feel like i'm drowning in an everlasting flood
Of pain, anger and loneliness
Please kill me now and put an end to my sadness
It's a beautiful day and sun rays are hitting me
But why do i feel so cold inside?why do i feel completely at sea?
It's a beautiful day but i've lost you forever
Today you left me just for her
Please tell me what you think
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Really good!
Your rhyming was phenomenal at the beginning.. but then it started losing it's flow towards the end.... but still an awesome write!!!!
Keep writing, this was great!!!
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alex
you shtill owe me pics of ur doggies
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Aw, a very sad poem! Again, this whole poem in full of such deep emotions that it pulls at the reader's own heartstrings. Great job!
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