Falling to my knees
I wrote your name in the sand
Until the ebb tide
Author notes
ebb – noun: the flowing back of the tide as the water returns to the sea.”
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Love this one, it is full of beautiful imagery,
Reminds me of Keats's epitaph "Here lies a man, whos name was writ in water."
beautiful 'KU!!!
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Love the imagery, it leaves the romantic touch upon the words as well I can almost hear the eternal roar of the changing tides, there is so much packed inside this little 'Ku. A beautifuly warming image.
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niiiice
I love this. GREAT!! I guess I always have loved hiakus, but this one is one of my favorites that I have read in awhile. -
An act of love ...
writing in water and in sand. For within mortal moments immortality becomes more profound.
Love
Myra
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Wow! No more to say!!!
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SO sad can be these letters... AS the rhythms of the ocean come and go interconnected with all thought and life fire moving so the water in patterns of earth and air an elemental touch the time moves in unknowable process wherein lays the ancient magic of the cycles, as so the karma is to free and live in joy on a thunderous waved return of the gracious now... your words help the works of elves and ancients wisely as so i thank your wisdom
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Time is not linear... every moment is an eternity... a reconfiguring eternity... reconfigure with the moment... give all you have to each moment and the moment is complete... be complete in all moments and you are complete... such a brilliant way to describe a loving gesture... three bunnies who will last on this page forever. I am waiting right here for my kiss.
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Beautifully done..It is so easy to form the imagery in your mind. Simplistic yet dynamic.
Great job, my friend.
Soulful Woman
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This is really pretty. Brings back great memories from the beach! I love haikus, I wish I could write them as pretty as this..
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Lovely! I have done that! I got really sunburned that day!
xxoo
dk
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Beautiful
just a very beautiful Haiku
soft, and lovely
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Thank you, welcome home girlfriend.
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Waiting at the shore…
Sea water erodes my heart;
Screaming in silence.
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nice Haiku, daughter dear,
it does prompt one comment from me;
ebb – noun: the flowing back of love as it returns stronger with each incoming tide of passion and compassion.
Bay of Fundy
me
Dad
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Amera....sigh. I love haiku...
You are beautiful, darling one.
Lane
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You need to write more words in your comments so I can give you little stars. You even left before I could kiss you.
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Awesome write!
and yay!
I'm the first to comment!
Until the ebb tide
I'll make a mental note to look up ebb
but this peice is very deep
and i'm sure many will look at it in different ways
but when I read this poem
what i feel is that
Nothing Lasts Forever
Everything fades away
and, especially now, I can really feel this poem
I really liked this picture
god knows where you've found all of them
but you have great taste
keep it up
Never ♥
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Thank you so much. I should have put that in my author’s notes. “ebb –noun the flowing back of the tide as the water returns to the sea.”
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