OCEAN OF LOVE
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Oh ! My Beloved!!
I don’t know how to swim a lake
Or Cross over the river to the other end
How Can I now overcome the pace of a sea ?
No My Dear! A Very well NO indeed!
But when you made your eyes
to hug me
and your heart to embrace me
surprisingly oh! My Darling!
With a serene soul
I am now able to
Swim speedily the ocean of love
Ocean of love
And really the ocean of love!!!
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A contest entry
- MAKE ME SEE!! (Imagery!!) by Angierie.
450 points, ended March 4, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Next to you.
I am floating my simple crude country-boat in the Ocean of Love"just after you! "I don't know how to swim a lake/or crosss over the river to the other end' but i know ,I am not alone.We shall overcome as you've depicted in this poem. -
May we be drowning in such Ocean!
Sol
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lolsolid, fluid penning
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Lovingly enriched
Hello,
This was a very beautiful write my friend. I love how you described love in an emotional and some what spiritual way.Your words speak volumes and they are enriched with such beauty and devotion.Your poem is so tastefully written,and gently spoken!. I really enjoyed this write. Keep up the great work, you have so much talent to share with us and you are a real pleasure to read!
Take care and many blessings to you.
Angel.
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Nice Write
Your poem has much warmth and beauty in it. My favorite lines are but when you made your eyes to hug me and your heart to embrace me. These words are liquid beauty that flow. -
Beautiful Write
The words of your poem are beautiful. Good imagery, good content. Love makes the world go 'round.
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