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Bare

I am naked
Without facades
Without false pretenses
Without masked illusions

I am naked
I am the face you see
Without needing a reason
Without wanting a mask

I choose my own reality
I am only me
I am naked

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  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    March 17, 2007

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    Great This is a very interesting way to look at the meaning of naked..as I am assuming that you meant the person in question wishes to be naked...no hidden faces ..no false masked emotions..but naked....just me... GREAT WRITE!!! I shoulda found you a long time ago LOL


  • Dawrion Darklinmoon
    March 15, 2007

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    Perfect!

    That makes perfect sense, we all chose who we want or need to be. In some cases we feel reckless and overwellmed and need to put up walls. Other time we are naked left for the whole world to see and nothing to hide.


  • Starswhispers silver member
    March 7, 2007

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    What a lovely write I love the flow the idea and the message it conveys well done on your trophy.


  • DancingRed
    March 3, 2007

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    Pure, unadulterated you.
    I love the power in the line "without wanting a mask" for it is one thing to be 'naked', but another thing to want to be that way.
    Beautiful interpretation of the word.

    Thank you for entering this poetic piece in my contest.

    DancingRed.


  • ScarletO gold member
    March 3, 2007

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    Put some clothes on would you? lol I really liked this poem...nice feel to it.

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