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I dream
of
Razor wired wings
Of hurtful butterflies
In my stomach
Ripping at me
They tear me apart
And all you do
Is laugh
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Take this knife
Slit my throat
Take my life
And with my blood
Drown my soul
Until im free
Hate me
Maim me
Hit me down
Kick me
Abuse me
Kill me now
Take this hook
Dig it deep
Extract my heart
Cut it up
Grind it down
I don’t need it
Take a nail
Skewer my wrist
Watch me bleed
Cry
And Shout
Take a hammer
And shut my mouth!
Hate me
Maim me
Hit me down
Kick me
Abuse me
Kill me now
I will never crawl again
I will never fall again
I will never cry again
Unless you
Kill
Me
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I dream
of
Razor wired wings
Of hurtful butterflies
In my stomach
Ripping at me
They tear me apart
And all you do
Is laugh
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Hit me
Cut me
Kick me around
Disfigure me
Destroy me
And
Kill me
NOW
Author notes
This is how I feel....
I used the title "Hurtful Butterflies"
A contest entry
- Wordbank and Titles ♥ by CazzieJade.
450 points, ended March 9, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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WOW
THIS IS SOOOO GOOD! I LOVE THIS! LIKE REALLY LOVE THIS. KUDOS AND CONGRATS! It's very deep and emotional, very catchy and fast paced. 'im srory you feel like this, i hope you're doing better
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this is an amazing piece! wow, i am spellbound at the emtion flowing through. its almost as if i can feel your pain seeping through. you have done a wonderful job. good luck with the contest. hope you win gold.
~erica~
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Forgot to applaud
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Ow.
That made cringe in ouchness!!!
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