From hello you bewitched my dreams
and captured my gypsy soul
like a wild lightning storm
erupting over the port
where I took solace
Like a phantom in the night
you stole my heart
leaving me to long for the
tender cries of ecstasy
I wish to escape my mouth
You touch my deepest depths
with your intense passion
like a poetic collage
we blend together
in centrifugal motion
Drifter
I love you like no other
your sweet taboo enchanting
to my most secret desires
leaving me mystified
and wanting more
A million rainy days
I wish for
to be curled up in your arms
lingering time away
on this whimsical carousel
of passion
And as the morning dew settles
on the leaves outside our window
it's the lovely sound of your breath
that I long to hear
Dear Drifter
I love you
today, tomorrow, and always
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Like a phantom in the night. you stole my heart. What a great write. Even if this were a dream, he can become real!
return the favor?
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Thank you so very much.
Dusty.
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Beautiful and gripping - the serene emotions are touching and fluent. A beautiful piece dedicated in the ode to love.
Thanks for entering,
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your romantic abilities are absoulutly amazing. I really like your first 5 lines, they flow in such ease. Thank you so much for entering my contest. feel free to chat with me!
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Very romantic!!
Dusty,
This is just another example of your ability to write the perfect romance novel!! Captivating....filled with sensual imagery... I loved it!!!
Shannon
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Thank you Shannon..I appreciate it
always..And so good to hear from you
Dusty
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wow! beautiful, good luck
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What a truly beautiful and wonderful write this is, Dusty
So loving; so romantic and awesomely written! More than glad I clicked on this today
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Thank you so very much...
Dusty
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Wow-
It's really descriptive...really sets the tone of what love is.
Very pretty.
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Thanks!!!!
Dusty
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Oh this is so beautiful, a lovely
tribute to love. I particularly
like......like a poetic collage
we blend together in centrifugal
motion. So well put, wonderful!
An absolute joy to read...Bravo!
Kelly
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Thank you so very much for the kind words...
Dusty
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this I like there is a sense of longing and a true feeling of love that is still alive--the second and third stanza really POP out
the Satyr
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Thanks so very much...I appreciate your opinion on my writes....Thanks a bunch...
~~~~~Dusty~~~~~
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i thought that this was a great piece of work. You are a very talented writer and maybe one fay be known. Good job and i hope that you keep up the good work.
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Thank you so very much..I greatly appreciate it*happ*
~~~~Dusty~~~~
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this is a really beautiful poem it captured my mind and i enjoyed every second well done on a gr8 write keep writing j
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Thank you so very very much..I appreciate the sweet comment..
~~~~Dusty~~~~
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Wow - this was beautiful! I really loved this. I felt the emotion with every word. I really loved this part:
"You touch my deepest depths
with your intense passion
like a poetic collage
we blend together
in centrifugal motion"
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Thank you so very much..I appreciate you
~~~~Dusty~~~~
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aww this was very pretty. very sexy picture.
your piece was very sweet.... absolutely beautifully lovely
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Thank you so very much ...I truly appreciate it
Take care..
Dusty
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A million rainy days
I wish for
to be curled up in your arms
lingering time away
on this whimsical carousel
of passion
what else is needed in thelove when one can bring the deepest of the soul in the praise of lover...I am just speechless to read this fascinating verse here...a great poem indeed...
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Thank you so very much for stopping by to comment..It is greatly appreciated...
Thanks again...
Dusty
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oh so lovely. i especially like:
And as the morning dew settles
on the leaves outside our window
it's the lovely sound of your breath
that I long to hear
very nice job with writing this. enjoyed. was well worth the read.
blu
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read..I appreciate it very much...
~~~~~Dusty~~~~
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It's good to see something from you again Dusty. I always enjoy your writes so much. You've captured pure emotion in this. I'd choose a favorite passage...but I'm afraid I'd just end up copying the whole poem
Nicely done, and the best of luck in the contest
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Awwww, Thank you so much......I'm glad you liked it..
Love..Dusty
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Amaziing piece of writing Dusty. your poetry is always such a plesure to read.
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Thank you so much James..I do appreciate that
Much love...Dusty
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sweet me
sis ...it great to see you write agen and wot a great poem to come bck wif .... loves ya bunches sis cheeky xxxxxxxx
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Thank you sis..I love hearing from ya, I hope all is well your way....Love ya bunches
Your sis...Dusty
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Yes, I had read this earlier but could no comment at the time as i had to go take a cold shower. I'm glad to
see you once again writing, I think your last one was White Oleanders??
an enticing write to be certain. I especially liked;
A million rainy days
I wish for
to be curled up in your arms
lingering time away
on this whimsical carousel
of passion
Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
*rose8
Len
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Thanks Len..No I have'nt been writing to much here lately..I only do it when the mood strikes me just right..And I guess I was in the mood so hence, Dear Drifter...
Thank you again..
Love...Dusty
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This was very sensual to the soul to say the least. Swept away in heart by loves embrace...and the imagery that was presented was amazing, enrapturing even...as if it was the reader being cocooned in his arms. Great job sissa
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Thanks sis..I always appreciate it when you stop by to read...
Much love....Dusty
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SO VERY PASSIONATE!
Such a wonderful passion in each and every word! The heat of the moment so full of wonder and excitement!
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Thank you Kevin....I appreciate you always..
Much love....Dusty
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This poem is grand, swell, fantastic! Not many can use the words you did, in a poem, and make it sound natural. A delightful read, I must say, for those who enjoy good poetry I mean. I do, and there for I read your work and appreciated it. Thank you for entering in my contest!!
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