Sight was lost
in the war of life
Blinded
by it's veil of strife
Deceived
by the trilling fife
Misled
by ignorance run rife
Eyes shut
by the reaper's scythe
A contest entry
- TEN LINES or less ANYTHING CONTEST! 15 entries only by mysticstorm.
425 points, ended March 3, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very interesting piece of poetry. I loved the rhyme and the flow of the piece. It is very depictive of life and all it's hardships. But once you endure them you are stronger for them.
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How true it is! Life is life, which is saying a lot of the hardships of it. Very easy to get lost in and to lose one's self to it.
Deeply thought provoking and well done.
I love the title.
Thank you for entering!
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