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Home At Last

Grapefruit moon, one star shining,
Shining down on me.
I feel the song, and soon am pining,
For love’s sweet purity.

The road has left me worn and weary;
Gasping while I bide.
Grapefruit moon, one star shining
Cannot turn the tide.

The radio’s gone off the air,
And gives me time to think
Of how long I’ve run on a spare
To make it to the brink.

I ease it out and creep across
As all the lights go down.
Left with lines and lovers lost
By morning, out of town.

Kissing one more block
I Remember someone that I passed.
I let the engine talk.
It whispers, “Home at last.”

And grapefruit moon, one star shining,
Is hard to hide alone.
I hear the song, and soon am pining.
For that someone’s home.

They say if you get far enough away,
You’re on your way back home.

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  • in-the-twilight
    March 4, 2007

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    This is really good... nice write! I liked it... an amazing amazing write! You're such a great poet and I love it! Rock on! xoxo Meg

  • Nicole Hanna
    March 3, 2007

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    The imagery of grapefruit moon is fantastic. It's very original and makes me want to go write poetry just because it's inspirational. Thanks for that