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Tear's Constant

Gross misinterpretations
Under leering constellations,
Trapped in situations
Causing tribulations.

Lost in my mind
Unable to find
The knife to unbind
The ropes you have twined.

Kicking and screaming
Tears constant streaming
Your eyes are gleaming
In my pain you're dreaming.

This feeling I can't justify
Constantly wondering why
I cannot even cry.
I. Only. Want. To die.

Author notes

Sad, yes. Personal... I don't think so.

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  • theforgotten one
    August 28, 2007

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    I like it !

    I like it...the only thing I would change is the font color. It was very hard to read on this back ground. It was very good though!


  • legendd
    March 7, 2007
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    i realllly like this.


  • lyrical-rebel
    March 6, 2007
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    nice write... kinda kard to read the text color doesn't contrast too well with ur background... err hummm that aside i think this write is really nice... the rhyming is simple but effective... n over all is think u've brought out the concept n emotions well...