" Someone will always try to kick you down. Don't let them, you are too beautiful for tears."
A contest entry
- ADVICE FROM MOM in only one line by Melodies.
450 points, ended March 3, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Eloquent!
Short and exquisite with a very poignant message.
One to be taken very seriously by each reader.
Conngratulations my dear. Brilliant and very
consoling. -
beautiful and so very true.


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What a beautiful thing for your mother to say. And it's true too. You are too beautiful for tears. I'm sorry about the situation that caused her to say this though. much luv!


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awww, this was beautiful. nice job love.
much love,
the existentialist -
lovely...great advice from your mom and my congratulations on the well deserved gold


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Awww... I love this and your mom, too!
What a perfectly wonderful thing to say!
I am glad your mom said it!
It's true!


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It is wonderful advice... the words of someone wise and caring. Sorry it had to reach you from such a negative experience.
Be well.
~MotherMachineGunn~ -
sound advice for sure. Tears do make a beautiful person because it shows stregnth. TO hold back tears is to hide in fear of success.
Hope you practiced this well throughout life. It holds so much truth. -
this is such a sweet message to everyone. Its true though...seem like no matter how you look or what you try to do, someone is there making fun. But I agree never let them ppl "bother" you. Everyone is beautiful in their own ways....its just hard to get some ppl to see that. I really like what you wrote. You are an angel, a sweet loving, kind angel. Your such a great person and friend. love ya
amanda


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