wings so wide,
can spread across the ocean,
singing with every movement.
scales so beautiful,
with endless shimmers,
droplets make it glimmer.
a tail so long,
to protect him from any danger,
skiming across the waters top.
a dragon flies swiftly with speed,
towards its only stop.
a dragon lands with great ease,
next to a beautiful creature.
and turns to stare for a little while,
at every little feature.
small it was with eyes of blue,
furr of golden white.
a tail of hair long as can be,
with a main that shinned so bright.
a horn saw the dragon,
as long as the creatures neck.
spiralled up and out of his head,
to help protect at its best.
galloping around on shining gold hoofs,
as if in a dance.
the dragon realised that it was not the only beauty,
in all of the lands.
the dragon decided to name the creature,
but didnt know what to call it.
so the dragon went to find the answer,
but didnt go very far.
it found a name that suited the creature perfectly,
like petal went with flower.
so the dragon came back 4 the creature was,
a unicorn forever after.
A contest entry
- Evoke My Artistic Vision by crazylittledevil.
440 points, ended March 20, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lol my bad I must have went into fairyland when I typed dragon fly cause I didn't mean to add the fly. sorry for confusing you. The reason I must of done it is I wanted to fly away that day.
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An interesting tale about a dragon fly and a unicorn. I have not yet learnt how to draw them, but will consider attempting to pain this sometime. Just this line "with a main that shinned so bright" should read with a mane that shined so bright" after correcting spelling mishaps your poem will be perfect. Good luck in my contest
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That was lovely!
I am glad you were able to write this and enter it in my contest. Seriously, I loved the tale and your creativity.
Loved your choice of words, flow and rhyme.
Thank you so much for entering, keep on writing and good luck.
Nooni
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i like it. you seem to find a knack for good poetry girl . keep it up and i may decide to stay alive for a few more years
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