There's something popping in my brain
Electro Manet staci wave
I'm seeing things I can't Exsplane
a black fantasic Time Machine
The Light Of a Life
am i Living for Real
a hundered Chanals, Nothings On
belive Me Love something has gone wrong
Remote Control
Tighten you'r grip
when you get bored Then you can flip
On To The Next
do what your Told
Tv is better Then gold
and when you Change your Mind you Let Me know
you'r so Much better Then The Old Remote Control
Let's Take it One More Time from The very Top
heard The sound Of a Moth
we're Tripping This Magic box
Two Eyes a blaze but Never Lost
Remote Control
Tighten you'r grip
when you get bored Then you Can flip
On To The Next
do what your Told
Tv is better Then gold
And when you Change your Mind you Let Me know
you'r
so
Much
better Then The Old Remote Control
i want To sit inside and stare
Electrons flying Though The air
IT'S MORE THEN A MERICAL,
IT'S A GOD D@MN WORK OF ART!!!
Remote Control is better Then gold
Remote Control is better Then gold
Remote Control is better Then gold
Remote Control is better Then gold
Remote Control is better Then gold
Remote Control is better Then gold
Remote
Control
is
better
Then
Gold.
Author notes
ROCK 'n Roll!!!
all the letters in cap spell REMOTE CONTROL!!!
i wrote a poem about My Tv...That's an all Time Low in boredom for Me.
A contest entry
- The Love of music by saxophonicwolf.
550 points, ended March 4, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great write! Very very creative! I like it! Goodluck in the contest and thankyou for entering.
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Good flow. It might seem better if you fixed the spelling mistakes. Other than that, I thought this had a good beat to it. Different idea to write about for a song. Goof luck in the contest.
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thanks
yeah i should...did you see that all the caped letters are spell REMOTE CONTROL, cool huh? gtg, ttyl Zab.
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