This world we live in is constantly changing. In the past few years I have scene parts of our home destroyed. People like me taken .There is only one thing that keeps us safe or trapped I haven’t figured out which yet. But this thing must be true evil.
“ Hey guys look.” Steve said. He was one hyper little squirrel.
5. “What is it?”I asked.
“I don’t know.” He replied. I then looked up and saw it .It was like a wall or strange plant of some kind.
“I say we call it Bob.”Steve said in his hyper active voice.
“We are not calling it anything. Until we find out what it is!”I replied.
“You idiot shell brain.”A voice said from a near by tree. It was Neko the cat. I never
10. trusted that cat. “It’s a fence.”He said.
“A what?”
“What’s a fence?” Steve replied.
“The only thing keeping you trapped here until become tested on.”He said licking his paw.
“ No..that hasn’t happened since..forever.” I replied.
15. “Oh please .Did ya hear the new commercials. Easy breeze beautiful cover girl well guess what they test on animals. And YOUR NEXT MUWHA HA HA HA HA HA HA!” He said
“NO !” Steve said running around in circles.” I don’t want to die!”
“Listen to me.”I said.”Your not going to die.”I said.
“How do you know Tom?”Neko asked.”Any one of us could be next.”He said.
“Then I say we go over that fence and give them a piece of our minds who’s with me!” 20. All the other animals cheered.
“ Sorry to end the happiness but there is one problem.”He said and threw a left into the fence .It was fried.”You try to cross that fence you are fried.
The others looked at one another. A long time of silence passed until finally...the ground started to move. They all screamed.
25. “It’s them everyone hide .It’s the bulldozer! “Neko said. Everyone hid.
“A you idiot turn left.” There was then a big crashing sound.
“Grr you dove right into the fence ya Sh... poop head!” The one guy shouted.
“Sorry man .A Lets get out of here.”They then drove off.
“Now’s our chance!”I said.
30. “Lets go.” Steve said. He stuck his finger in a old black paint can and put black striped across his checks. So did everyone else. I put an old army dolls helmet on.”Ok boys “
”Excuse me!” said the hedge hog.”I’m a girl!”
“Ok boys and girl .Lets show these butt heads we mean business!”I said.
“Lets get umm!”Steve said. Then We all rushed over the fence and went over to the big tall building We all looked up.
35. “C..r ..a. .p. .y .. g..i. . r..l ”Steve said trying to sound it out.
“You fool it says cover girl.” Hannah the hedge hog replied.
“Oh.. Da I knew that!”Steve said. We all then went inside .People screamed and tried to hit us with nets but we fought back pretty good.
“You’ll never take me alive!” Steve said and chucked acorns at their heads. He then laughed manically.
40. Neko then found the cages where the other animals were kept for testing. He saw a big red button but could reach it.
“Tom over here.”He called to me. I hurried my little turtle feet over there.
“Tom I going to need you to use your head.” He said.
“But I don’t want to use my head.” he then threw me and the red button .I banged up against it. All the animals were free from their cages. And as the employees go. They went home crying like babies.
45. “We did it!”Steve said.
Well after that Cover girl went out of business. And we eventually got our home back. All because Neko had a nice little chat with the CEO .
“Saw! ”Neko said. “Lets see how you like being tested buddy!”He said and started the saw up.
“No!... back ya evil cat!”
And well that was that. Everyone lived happily ever after. At least we did. Still there are a lot of companies that test on animals and only you can stop them. So get a few friends and stand up from what you believe in. and stop animal testing! Right Elvis.
“You got that right shell-ie.”
Author notes
This is my first contest.I loved writing this.I thought it was funny espically the ending.I hope you like it.Please no bashing.Just just give helpful advice or coments.
Thank you and keep writing.
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370 points, ended March 16, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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900 points, ended March 20, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
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The Whales Sonata [for#1 in this contest] new Received the gold for its phenomenol portrayal of whales mating in contrast with the bloody deaths that they suffer every day. I loved the build up of this daily conflict that whales must face; the dichotomy of their wonderful, peaceful paradise juxtaposed with the sad possibility of their demise if they continue to be hunted the way that they are. This poem won for category #1, as it picked out a cause and portrayed the daily life and struggle of these magnificent mammals of the sea who are the largest sea animal that exists today. The imagery was so real that I could feel, taste, see and touch it through the incredible description that the words created. A Mother at Heart This poem moved me beyond words in it’s a wonderful true story about a lioness’s antics in the way that she adopted baby antelopes instead of eating them. This story won the silver trophy not so much that it was written flawlessly but in how it genuinely and with heartfelt emotion described the life of this legendary lioness who was a Buddha incarnated as a lioness who adopted and sheltered abandoned antelopes even at her own expense. Thats Alright Mama. "My faithful dog Trooper stayed with me throughout my battles with cancer. That dog understood more than most humans do and always knew when" This won the bronze for the 3rd option for pet therapy because it told the true story of a dog who gave his/her master hope and purpose to go on, simply by being there for him/her and loving them unconditionally, as most animals have the capacity to do. There are many stories such as this, and I honored it with the bronze trophy because it portrayed a story that has transpired over and over many times in real life - that animals love and save people all the time and are capable of sentient emotions much the same as humans. I decided to award more honorable mentions than I initially listed. There were so many good entries, it was impossible to only give three honorable mentions. In fact, I wish I could give everyone an honorable mention. They were all amazing, and every one touched me in a special way. I cried, I laughed and I learned from all of you. Thank you my friend for all of your lovely entries and for caring about the animals! I want to take a moment to give special thanks to all of the people who helped with this contest; Thelordreigns, Dark Raven, silverstar2.0 and storiesuntold. Thank you to all of you for your great input and the time that you invested in this worthy cause. Also, I want to give special thanks and honor to the Animal Lover’s Group owner, Debilynn. This contest was done for her, in gratitude and love for keeping this group alive for us. We wish her happiness and well-being and I would like everyone to keep her in their prayers. She has been going through some health hurtles lately, and we hope for her speedy recovery. Do I Deserve This? A very well-written and telling poem about how much dogs suffer who are kept in miserable conditions, such as puppy mills, for dog fighting, even for being eaten! It was so sad how it adeptly portrayed that they go to sleep each night dreaming for a better life. [ f ] [ a ] [ c ] [ t ] [ o ] [ r ] [ y ] For pointing out the atrocities of factory farming and that animals endure unbelievable suffering because they feel like we do. Adopt A Pet: It's better than marriage A really cute story about how having a pet is the next best thing, or sometimes even better, than being married! Homage to Garuda, the Chickadee (Metered Mirror-Rhyme) An adorable tribute to a beautiful bird and all of her endearing qualities. Guardian of the Keep This was delightful in how it portrayed a very busy little pup taking the job of protecting the master’s home very seriously. legislate Made one aware of how much power is in the hands of our legislatures, and what an impact their decisions have on the welfare of animals. "Scrubbing Bubbles" An honorable mention for the cutest write about bathing cats and their antics. The photo says it all! I really related to this. A Cat in This Town Cute and clever perspective of the lives of feral cats; their “upside down” lives. Also, very tragic - but told in a humorous way - if that is possible. Alice "Hello, my name is Alice I visit every week I let kids touch and stroke me because I cannot speak, A very moving poem about pet/dog therapy." Blood Soaked Humanity "Yes I meant to use HELL in the form I did..." Very intense poem about animals who are brutally killed all for their fur or “for the price of ivory” real texas chainsaw "the shackles release her but its not to free her" A very vivid and upsetting poem about how animals suffer when they are slaughtered because THE HUMANE SLAUGHTER ACT is not being enforced by the USDA. It does not spare the reader of the horrid reality of what these poor animals go through. We're Not Gonna Take It! These animals are tired to being tested on.So when Humans threaten their lives and their home they deside to fight back! See what happens I really enjoyed this was about a tale of how a group of animals escaped from an animal-testing laboratory. PETA Stance The cutest poem about PETA (People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals), with quite a twist of humor! A Doggie Dog Life(short Story) A cute tale about how a puppy views things. I would have given more, but I was running out of points. A few of the entries, I was going to give an honorable mention to, but I noticed they had already won an honorable mention. One that I want to give special mention to here is; Black Bear A soulful write about the plight of the Black Bear, and how their home and rights are slowly being taken away from them. I loved the imagery and how the mother bear is portrayed as facing it alone. I loved all of them, and if time allowed I would comment further. All of the entries received a personal comment from me and I appreciate all of the other judges comments as well. Blessing to all of you and PLEASE keep speaking out for those who cannot for themselves!
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Yep it is and how they get revenge!
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Nice!Is it about two animals going to get tested on by scientists?
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VERY cute! I loved how the one character misread the Covergirl label for Crappygirl. Clever! A story told from the viewpoint of the animals. A funny sketch, but it drives the truth home about how much animals suffer needlessly by an old, outdated method of testing the safety of products. If people stop using these inhumane company's products, they will stop animal testing or GO OUT OF BUSINESS. You made this point very clear. The ending was a little violent, in a light-hearted cartoony way, but ,hey - what goes around comes around. It seemed like you really enjoyed writing this. I could see the entire scenario in my mind, like a children's movies or cartoon. It is the sad truth that these animals lead horrible, miserable lives. That is why we should all READ THE LABELS and make sure they say, NOT TESTED ON ANIMALS!
Thank you for this great, entertaining, yet truthful story. I love it when the animals are given a voice! -
tehe, cute nicole. oh, crap, i'm the judge, i shouldn't kno who u are, but you're style is easy to pick out (not in a bad way) great job, it was funny!!
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