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I love just sitting here doing nothing;
But I am always left in the dark.
Wondering if I'm real,
If he's real,
If anyone's real.
It's riddled me to the point of no return.
Things I say usually have two meanings.

As I've always said,
I'd prefer to self destruct,
With help from you.

L.

Author notes

Wrote today after an encounter with an ex.
Written June 26th, 2003

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  • nemo
    June 26, 2003
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    Yep I understand you agaian...I know I'm repeating myself but I really do...I like this sarcasm and irony...All went to the last line...


    Loved it

    Keep it writing...

    sajonara