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Jailhouse Prophet

I sigh,
relevant to the winds howl...
gasping for breath
inside this hole.
My only possession,
My pen,
A friend...
that soothes my inner being,
tames the beast
crawling within.
And so,
My days are spent,
quietly writing,
enscribing all my thoughts on stone.
A check list of my years
spent in this domain.
And when I finish
the art I have done,
i lay back
and stare,
A smile spilled across my face,
making me
the person I am.

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I am...Victoria.

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  • Angierie
    March 6, 2007
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    Wooo! Ok.. love this.
    Even the name is creative..

    Great job!!!!!

    Angie


  • PerfectImperfection
    March 2, 2007

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    [Damn... I am struck with such a powerful poetic blow, I am just speechless, well almost! Rest of comment with held until the end...] Thank you so much for entering!

    Here is the rest... You have a very refreshing way with your words - everything I have read from you has that angsty, yet hopeful and intriguing feel about it. This is a fine example of why I love your writing; thank you for sharing dearest!!! Take care!!!