This life can be compared at times
To a long dark tunnel
That seems to have no end in sight,
But if you continue to walk
With unfailing faith;
You will eventually see the light.
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A contest entry
- I Love Short Poems by silverscent.
430 points, ended March 11, 2007, 27 entries
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An enjoyable write...
An enjoyable write; we need to remember - that His Light will naturally shine through us, when we live humblely before His Presence; good job. --Joe
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A sweet and inspirational write. The hint of rhyme worked nicely too. I liked this, thanks for entering.
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This is true.
The belief in God and the walking in the light is really simple. You have written a great truth here.
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