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Distant Strumming


I bow my head
in wish for wing
to strum harp in gladness
upon your heart,

to brush your face
with soft contemplation
sprinkled in simple pleasures,
which cannot be measured,

to plant flowers
in your garden of dreams
and spill my stream
into your mountain splendor,

capture your laughter,
as it paints my skies
with glorious song of Season!

I have known you
before these waters
separated our souls,

in moments laced with wonder,
when we danced,
fingers intertwined
to the beating of a distant drum,

as you found my spirit

and it was there
that our love began....


♥ ♥

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I chose to write about love ♥ because that is the ones thet you seem to like from me.

I want to thank Wendy for always inspiring us with your wonderful contests and for being a wonderful lady and friend

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 2, 2007

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    Beautiful Poetry~

    Wow, it's been awhile since I've read ya, now I see yet again what I've been missing. I enjoy this poem, I like a unique style flow, and you have yourself one! Thanks for sharing sweet soul, and I only wish you the best in this contest! Much love! Please pen on, you rock!


  • jasminerose
    March 2, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    Lynda,
    Your poem is a reflection of your golden heart of love!
    "This" is why I call you the Queen of Love poetry!
    My Queen! I once again bow to thee in admiration!
    Jazzy


  • JoyfulWriter
    March 2, 2007

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    I enjoy it when you write about love...always ends up with the most beautiful words and causing such a profound reaction....your heart is so beautiful! Smiles, Terry


  • kaibab silver member
    March 2, 2007

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    Such a sweet love poem full of windy feathers and such a great entryn for this contest...I shal have to get peaceful and see if anything magic happen..just beautiful


  • StarEyes
    March 2, 2007

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    *sighs*

    This is sooooo sweet and tender, and full of love! I love it! You have such a way with words, this is amazing!! Keep that pen flowing! Best of luck in the contest!!



    Nyetta


  • Fug-azi
    March 2, 2007
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    Once again you pen such beauty .. you are light to darkness.


  • CloudedCollusion
    March 2, 2007

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    Lynda,
    Once again you have penned a beautiful love poem.
    Eric


  • PerfectImperfection
    March 2, 2007

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    Thank you so very much for entering! (rest of comment held in 'till contest closes - hope I don't turn blue lol!)
    I was changing from blue to purple - so I thought I would add that this is - AS ALWAYS - a glorious representation of your soul. A beautiful hope amidst layers of love and thoughtful intention. Very well spoken and composed...


  • troyias
    March 2, 2007

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    Beautiful

    You always write wonder songs of lucious love, and always do it so well. Great Job, sweetheart.

    *Go with God* my Child

    Mom

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