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Rodeo

hes holding on tight
he thinks hes got it right
but he doesnt know
his cowboy pride has got to go
because cowboys are hard headed
and have no clue where shes headed
because she knows
hes gonna go
to that damn thing he calls a rodeo
he better swallow his pride
and tuck his tail to hide
because she knows
hes gonna go
to that damn thing he calls a rodeo
he better tell her
that he loves her
and hold her tight
and be there every night
he knows he might have to let go
because he made the choice to go
to that damn thing he callls rodeo
its the only life he knows
but she got sick of that damn thing he called rodeo

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  • tawk gold member
    August 24

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    Could almost be a Garth Brooks song. I love country music today and I love a good old rodeo as well love to watch the bull riding although I hate to see anyone get hurt. Great write. Thanks for visiting one of my poems I hope you liked it,

    hugs,

    Theresa


  • tearsoflove
    January 4, 2008
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    i liked this alot it makes me think of me and my ex but his problem was fishing sounds crazy but really thats all he did. I liked the story all together and i like how you added how cowboys are so damn stubborn in the first few lines and how you mentioned their pride all in all i love it! good write


  • Love-Your-Memory
    March 20, 2007

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    good

    this is good. I thought it sounded like the Garth Brooks song first but then it was good how it was completly diffrent. Good job I liked it cuz I'm a country girl all the way.


  • Maybe Anastasia
    March 16, 2007

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    very nice. sounds alot like the garth brooks song. It's true but the only girl thats going to hold on to that cowboy for forever is the one getting in the truck and heading to the rodeo with him.