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This Weathered Eye

Timeless
This eye does gaze
Peering into my soul

Should I pass beneath
Will I leave
Mystery
In my wake
Or will only silence
This weathered eye
Emit?

Should I traverse
Will my passing be
Worthy of note?

Author notes

Inspired by the photo presented in this contest:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2341316

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  • pangur ban
    March 4, 2007

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    Your words complement the photograph very well... quiet, pensive and tranquil. This is a captivating write. Good luck with the contest.
  • ea silver member
    March 2, 2007

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    this is completely lovely; it takes the ethereal quality of the photograph and gives a voice to the ferryman who is passing under the bridge, entering the mists.