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Happy Tear

A lone tear falls down my tanned cheek.
but it is no normal tear,
for it holds many things.
shattered dreams, broken hope...
utter lonliness, sheer terror...
scary thoughts, bad dreams, a dying soul
but...
also love.
and love outrules it all.
Isn't it funny,
how one good memory can save a life?
as I collect pieces of the fallen stars
beneath the broken midnight sky,
that one tear spills down my cheek
and under my chin.
That happy tear.

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isn't really my best.....

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  • HugsForEveryone
    June 30, 2007

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    lol I like it! I do understand you dont like it much... but if you don't like it so much, why don't you just delete it? (I am NOT saying you should, because I like it...


  • Kittenlov
    March 16, 2007
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    Not bad

    Sam your preety good but try to get some powems that are funny and energetic