I'm still drinking
the same old salty
tears
I'm still tripping over
the same old
memories
I'm still feeling
your hands
melting into mine
Been ever so long
since the moment I lost
been gone
The moment
of your essence
exhaling
eternity's gates
I still remember
our triumphed moments
of glory
of love
of freedom, of joy and laughter
I still feel
the touch of your palms
upon my ablushed cheeks
I still mourn
over my dispared heartbeats
that have left my flayed heart
of its passion of living
It been ever so lonely
to live on
without the likes of you
People been ever so cruel
not understanding my reasons
to why I can't let go of you
To why I can't
let my heart fall for another
man
You've left this world
but always live on
in my heart's essence
Caressed by your love
I can never forget how you
took my hands into a haven
located within your arms
The smile
that I once saw
upon your eyes
The tenderness
that I once felt
upon your touch
The aggressiveness
that I once loved
upon your jealousy
over me - to others
I still
bewet
my sheets
with stains of tears
Author notes
Dedicated to Madeen - I still miss you
1988 - 2004
Please tell me what you think
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Powerful tribute. Love continues after death, as shown in this poem. Sorry for your loss.
Best wishes
Pozo
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Gre@t Job!
I believe that you really did as well as done a really good job with this special Poem , that come's straight from the Heart. There are not many other word's that can be said, for they are all written here from your mind.Keep up the good writting.
LoveSpell-PurpleRose
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Wonderful imagery with some excellent metaphors woven in to compliment this tender iof sad piece. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors.
Hetohke'e * 
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loss at any time is difficult but when they're young and not even grown it seems to make it harder because of that youthful innocense they still posses.
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its a really good poem i like it a lot its very sad and im sorry about it this poem has great meaning its depth is astounding good write
-the true
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Bravo!
Losing someone that you love through their death is awful, I have been there. It hurts so much more than if they left you and were still alive. I know how it cuts and how your soul bleeds. Be well my young friend,
Eyec
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Great
I love the feeling behind your poetry!! I miss talking to you to,it's been so long
~loves Lissa~
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yeah, I miss you too sweetheart
try to get on more often would ya?
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I try to get on as often as possible but my sis is always on(GRR)It's so annoying anyways how are you?? I miss you
ttyl Loves Lissa
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sad
is it about your fiance?... -
Oh wow... Sweetie you have amazing talent. With you, I can see, it's true that in our darkest hours do we shine the brightest. Your deeply emotional poetry is so raw it feels like it's still bleeding... I'm sorry I've missed so much of it while I was away. I want to print this one ASAP, but since I'm at home, it's going to have to wait until I have an access to my own computer. Right now I'm at a drop-in near the place that I'm staying. Keep it up, you've made my day so much easier.
Lea
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