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Poker Night Blues

I don't know how I'm still alive
(I really MUST learn how to drive)
after an accident of this kind,
with the sky above and the ground behind.
I'm hanging now up in the air
by one wheel only and a prayer,
waiting for a rescue team
to get me down--oh, I could scream:
for what has really got me pissed
is the poker night that I have missed!

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  • bethan-gaze
    March 11, 2007

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    Nice one

    Wonderful! I love the way you don't give a stuff about the car - that's just an inconvenience - hey, you missed your darned poker night! Congrats on the silver - you deserve it.


  • Grey Mouser
    March 10, 2007
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    The things that make us mad are the lost opportunities that come about through our own misfortune. LOL. Now that is a perfect interpretation of the picture. Thanks very much for the wonderful entry into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,

    Mouser


  • grrlshadow
    March 9, 2007
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    ah bloody marvelous!


  • Floorboards
    March 2, 2007

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    heeheehee

    nice one bill , i like it, very humerous,
    well done again pal,
    cheers,
    alex


  • Elfin
    March 2, 2007
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    LOL

    Lmao, well done and good luck in the contest. Val


  • Sunshine Always
    March 2, 2007

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    Great outlook on life Bill. Bit like me!! I be cheesed off at the same thing. Another smashing little jewel from your treasure chest.....mal


  • Lovely 2
    March 2, 2007

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    Very interesting the way you are in a panic, and yet you are worried about your poker game!!! Fun poem.

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