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Unloved

Fire in their eyes
Pain in their hearts
Sorrow all around them

Hate spread around
Love never seen
Care is nonexistant

All around
Is pain
And suffering

And
Nobody
Cares

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special thanks to deathless for the title!

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  • Bosky
    July 9, 2007

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    So true, so true... Exactly how I feel. You've left me speechless.

    Amazing.

    Always,
    Cassie

  • Heavenly Star
    March 10, 2007
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    This is a powerful write you penned here dear poet, well done


  • Her hand in yours
    March 5, 2007

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    Awwww hunny, just so true and very painful, how you explain these things, always happening, very creative with words, just so powerful and deep....
    It just explains everything, how we can all relate to this so much....

    I hope you're feeling well there,
    antonio

    Here's my titles
    1. Unloved
    2. Worn out
    3. Paralzed
    4. Left behind
    5. The death

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