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Depression

Dark thoughts now do settle in
Energy loss is sudden
Pressure is upon you
Red and black and dark blue
Emotions rage inside
Smiles all seem to hide
Suicide is in your head
In your mind, you just feel dead
Only hate that you can feel
Never love, it can't feel real

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I've been asked what depression is to me. This is my definition.

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  • ItalianPride09
    March 21, 2007
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    I like this poem its so proscriptive!!!


  • wish you loved me
    March 9, 2007
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    *hugs for all*

    thank you, everyone!
    jen


  • Her hand in yours
    March 5, 2007
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    Just so true and hurtful, deperession is the worst, it kills us completely, shatters our world in an instant,
    How you explain here, its just so amazing, you give them the feeling of always dying and feeling like dead

    I hope you're feeling well there hunny


  • WatchtowerBurning
    March 3, 2007
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    that is amezing..how is everything? life is great for me wow woot woot

  • Espantapajaros
    March 2, 2007

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    Extremely cool!

    That is great definition for depression. I have come through some of these symptoms myself. U can write n that's cool. keep it up.

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