Fill me with your lies,
your empty words,
your deceitful kisses.
Each will only further entrance me,
only make me more vulnerable to you,
handing over to you my hearts key.
I look upon you lovingly,
every night and every day,
constantly asking...
Why?
Why is it that I stay?
Lie to me baby,
let me hear your words.
Say it baby,
play around with my mind.
But, before you do,
let me once more gaze upon you,
let me feel your empty touch,
let me see that loving facade.
Oh yes baby,
I do love you too.
But for all you know,
I may be lying to you.
Let's keep repeating this game baby,
I'll continue saying 'I Love You'
and you keep pretending,
that you love me too.
I'll let you believe,
that your words are true.
Author notes
it's not all that great at all, but it's a game that each one of us has played at a point, and I'm playing it right now. I know he's lying to me, I've caught him in his lies..but I can't help but keep loving him.
Be honest and tell me what you think
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I really like this, very different from what I remember from when I use to read everything but Its still very touching, at first I found myself distant from the begining and then fell for the poem.. Really Awesome!
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I like it. Its like something I wrote to my ex. Its the lies that keep us going because though we know there lies we can still hope there not true. Its the lies that ruin and save us. I liked it
Lie to me baby,
let me hear your words.
Say it baby,
play around with my mind.
My last relation ship was all mind games so that had to keep me reading. I'd like to say. I won the game with him though.
Brava
NoL
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Sole! You are magnificent! Hun, you are way better than some asshole guy who lies to you. want me to kill him for you?
I love you even though we don't talk much which is sad. did you know i had a baby? her name is Kylei and she is 7m old. anyways, yeah good poem and i love ya!
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tsktsk
don't go hurting yourself again Sunshine,
aint gonna do you a bit of good to stay with that boy.
You know it.. i love you babe
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Hey honey,
Been awhile, has it not? I would say hope all is going well, but apparently it isn't.
I don't have to tell you that you deserve better, because you know you do. Sometimes we do play these games, but all it does it hurt in the long run. A game that really isn't worth playing, especially when it comes to your emotions.
As for the peice, being that it's from your heart, I believe it's excelent. There's nothing more special than raw, human feelings. I really do hope things get better for you.
I still owe you that trip to Hot Topic, haha!
Love ya!
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