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Break Me

Break me down
Hurt my pride
Screaming breathless
Suicide
Drowning slow
Drooping rose
Burnt in heat
Of charging foes
Grating, slicing
Easily done
Damned revenge
Life undone
Letters lost
A useless word
Sullen, stubborn
Goes unheard
Break me down
Hurt my pride
Messy emotions
Are suicide

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Don't want comments. I know that this is a piece of crap.

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  • starving4perfection
    January 29

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    omg its NOT a piece of crap! i think it was a really strong good write, i can relate to you there aswel. im sorry you've been through so much. if you wanna talk you can message me anytime x

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 22, 2008

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    It's not a piece if crap in my mind... I have felt like this myself too many times to mention.. penned with heart

    Karen