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Memories of hope...

Distant thoughts to remember
Without hopes to realize forever
But making it all worthwhile
Moments cherished without a smile

No annals of loss and gain
Will make those moments mine again
But with the glory of them in mind
Looking up to destiny from behind

Some morbid thoughts just gone by
With hopes of new dawn in my eye
Tell me where do dreams come from?
I'll scour them from fate to come

Reminding memories of moments I grope
Conceiving my fate with glow of hope...

Author notes

"Never let a moment just pass by,it could be a memory forever"

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  • smiley
    March 2, 2007

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    wow

    this was wonderful to read... this line says it all:
    Reminding memories of moments I grope
    Conceiving my fate with glow of hope...

    Yvonne


  • Sweetangelgrace gold member
    March 2, 2007

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    This poem was really a good one. the words were used in such a flowing way it all pieced together perfectly...
    Beautiful work and an honour to read and appreciate. Well done.
    Good luck in my contest!

    ~~GRACE~~

  • Golden Jaguar
    March 2, 2007

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    Fantastic!!

    Just the absolutely wonderful work - i enjoyed reading it and especially the last lines - so much of sense and feelings! Great!!!

    Good luck!

    ~G.J~

  • left
    March 2, 2007

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    The world has gone into a direction where many have only memories of hope indeed. Through an accident of life we have been born in a place and time where we are still allowed to cherish hopes, but most make a mess of even that, hoping for things without any meaning or purpose. This poem however seems to address matters of a wider scope, where hopes matter and dreams live, attempting to make us all aware that the reality we live in is merely a transient illusion. Thank you for creating and sharing and good luck in the contest. Take care,

    U

  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 2, 2007

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    Reminding memories of moments I grope
    Conceiving my fate with glow of hope...


    i love the quote, but i kind of like this line better, you did a great job on this whole thing, it was a pleasure to read, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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